Bonjour de la Rose
Rosie's taken
that pill again.
Painting the kitchen
with a finger-nail
polish brush,
Arabesques of cherubs
every three inches.
As her son
hacks with pneumonia,
She hums
an unwritten fugue.
There is a place,
One day,
Where cherubs
fly away as,
at sixteen,
that boy
opens his veins
and dies like
a promise.
A day when
Rosie tells a new love,
"You're just
like my son."
as Cherubs
weep down
dirty walls.
1 comment:
This one merits an edit. It could be a fine ballad if you pitched an article here and there. It needs a solid rhythm.
... For example, feel the change in tempo if you just tweaked this into:
Painting the kitchen
with finger-nail
polish.
I really like this one. It's cool. Bey
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