"Dazzling in the sun wash" would be the only tweak I'd make in this delicious boy scene. Oh David, this is such a cheerful poem; I can feel the dry warmth and imagine the soft tumble. Bey
*sun's
Oh, btw, this is possibly my favorite of your recent works.
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"Dazzling in the sun wash" would be the only tweak I'd make in this delicious boy scene. Oh David, this is such a cheerful poem; I can feel the dry warmth and imagine the soft tumble. Bey
*sun's
Oh, btw, this is possibly my favorite of your recent works.
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