There are some lovely images in this write... but the seasonal semiotics don't fit. April burning and summers downpour don't make sense. Was this one of your romantic moods on overdrive? I do like the format and classic English diction. Bless you for not torturing us with your Roman theatrics on this one. Sarai
The seasonal, i.e. temporal, semiotics do fit. In April Florida, and myself(brushfires, lust) did burn. Now, in Summer, we are blessed with rain everyday. These are the seasonal seams of Florida and, small case, the accidental leaps of my amorous life. "Seasonal Semiotics"-good one. LOL I love you--And also--the poem refers back to previous poems--"Brushfire Sun"--etc.....But, apparently, these allusions escape you...
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There are some lovely images in this write... but the seasonal semiotics don't fit. April burning and summers downpour don't make sense. Was this one of your romantic moods on overdrive? I do like the format and classic English diction. Bless you for not torturing us with your Roman theatrics on this one. Sarai
The seasonal, i.e. temporal, semiotics do fit. In April Florida, and myself(brushfires, lust) did burn. Now, in Summer, we are blessed with rain everyday. These are the seasonal seams of Florida and, small case, the accidental leaps of my amorous life. "Seasonal Semiotics"-good one. LOL I love you--And also--the poem refers back to previous poems--"Brushfire Sun"--etc.....But, apparently, these allusions escape you...
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