I like this very much David. The bare starkness of it. I think I'd have left the dry out of the well though.Perhaps abandoned instead? S
I looked it over. Its not so much the word itself but the alliteration that doesn't quite work for me. S
P.S. Favorite line: "Life lost in speaking".
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I like this very much David. The bare starkness of it. I think I'd have left the dry out of the well though.
Perhaps abandoned instead? S
I looked it over. Its not so much the word itself but the alliteration that doesn't quite work for me. S
P.S. Favorite line: "Life lost in speaking".
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