Monday, February 04, 2008

Already

In a holler
where toy trains
rest under
last year's leaves

Dreams a
comforting
surrender

an inequality
on the map
of tenderness.

She smiles
knowing
what must never
be said

Has

Already
tindered rays
from my eyes

to hers.
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2 comments:

  1. Anatole David3:22 PM

    Anyone can post a comment on my blog. Be as insensitive as possible. My comments are open to all and I refuse to censor candor.

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  2. Beysshoes2:59 AM

    One small change to suggest for this lovely lilt of a write:

    Has

    Already
    tendered rays
    from

    My eyes.

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